Tuesday, March 2, 2010
Exploring Italy
I chose Italy because I always wanted to go there. My grandparents from my mom's side are of Italian descent. I think there are many beautiful places to go in Italy. I also love the food. In addition, I think the language sounds very attractive and it is a little similar to Portuguese.
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Nicole,
ReplyDeleteI'm so happy that you picked Italy to study. It is such an amazing country with such rich history. I can't wait to read about everything that you discover. Your English looks FABULOUS! Great job!
A few suggestions for you:
In the "About Me" section:
. I finished the Law School
. I decided to live
. come to USA
In the "Interests" section:
. Keep all of your verbs parallel- for example "travel" should be "traveling"
In the "Italian Flag" section:
. 10 June 1946
In the "Exploring Italy" section:
. because I always want
. "are of Italian descent" is much more common than the way you have it worded
I really want to hear more about Italy! I know only one thing about it: they have the best food there! =D
ReplyDeleteI really love Italy's ancient cities..... and of course they have great food!!
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